Hi I am Sarosh Lodhi,18, presenting to you the Legend of a lifetime. Meet Essel, a normal boy like anyone, on his journey to become a superhero. An interesting tale of adventure and bravery, That will keep you interested till the very end.

December 14, 2009

Chapter Five - The Girl


Three Years have passed since the Meteor incident, and it was another regular day for Essel. There are no reports of where Jim could be. He has contacted no one since then. But it was a bit sure that he was alive. The dreams of Venn Ju have followed Essel since then. These dreams always came in a sequence with every Dream, Venn was growing old, getting new experiences and was realizing his true power, his true but hidden potential. Essel, with those Dreams was himself learning much about moral values, ethics and his duties towards others. It was, as if Essel was living a whole new life in his dreams. But this time his dream was a bit Different.

In the Dream:

The whole of the world had been divided into two groups, 'Deceptics' with the leadership of Napros and the 'Mystics' with the leadership of Omarin, Venn's father. Venn was now older, taking part in the activities of his kingdom. The differences between the two groups have increased to such an extent that even a slight argument could have lead to a war. Deceptics wanted to take control over the whole world, making all their slaves. Mystics had decided to stop them from doing so. Napros was always busy planning a conspiracy against the King and his followers.

One Day when Venn went outside the kingdom with his friends for some work, he saw that the Deceptics have caught a tribe, and wanted to make them their slaves. Venn, although had no control of his powers yet decided to attack the Deceptics and let the tribe free. He planned a strategy, attacked the deceptics along with his friends and soldiers and everyone was saved, except one girl.
All the army when was taking the whole of the tribe to the kingdom, a lady came to Venn.

Lady : Help, help your highness. They took a girl but no one was able to save her from them.
Venn : But where have they took her?
Lady : They took her towards South.

Venn thought about it, this could have taken a long time if he would have asked help of the soldiers, as the legal formalities are to be completed first. He then decided to get her free himself. He reached the place where a small group of deceptics have made their camp. He was afraid yet determined to save the girl. He just then jumped into the camp with a sword in his hand.

Venn - I want the Girl you have held captive. Leave her or you will be dead.

The group was first shocked. But then they realised he was alone.

The leader (laughs): So you want the girl, okay. But how will you take her with yourself when you yourself would be held captive by us.

Venn just then attacked the leader with his sword. He faught well but at last he lost. He was also help captive in a dark tent. He then looked around and saw the girl who he went to save. She had a blanket all over her including her face. All he could see were her shiny black hairs.

Venn -     I came here to save you but i myself got stuck.( He smiles)
The girl - Oh really, Do you think yourself to be that strong and brave that you came here yourself without any help of someone older to you?

Venn gets embarrassed hearing that, he could say no more.
Then the Deceptics took Venn out of the tent to the leader.

Leader :             You are Venn. The prince of the kingdom. The son of the leader of the 'Mystics'. Is it true?
Venn (hesitates):Yes.
Leader (laughs): Now you are in our hands. Soon we'll get your father and the whole of the kingdom will be ours.
Venn (shouts angrily) : I wont let that Happen.
Leader :             Oh really, Wat would you do Kid? Cry like a baby.

Everyone starts laughing.
Venn's rage is at its maximum. He could no longer bear his insult.

Venn : This is it.

He then shines as bright as a star with bright red flames coming out of his body. The ropes with which he is tied gets burned. And in a split second all the Deceptics are down accept the leader.

Leader : What the hell ..... what was that?
Venn in another split second approaches the leader.

Venn : Tell Napros, He wont get the kingdom before he defeats me.

Leader runs away frightened. Venn then picks up the girl. And in an instant they both are in Venn's room. Leaving her over there, Venn faints.

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Alarm rings, Essel wakes up. It's holiday today. He and his family had to go to a party tonight. The night comes Essel enters the party well-dressed. As soon as he enters the party, he has his eye-contact with a girl. It seems as if she has something to do with Essel, but how could that be? He ignores. Then again there is an eye-contact, Essel ignores it again. The third time, Essel sees the girl walking towards him. She approaches him.

The girl - Hi, I am Amanda. I am in your class at school.

Amanda brings her hand forward.


Essel - Oh really, i had a feeling i have seen you somewhere before. Hi, i am Essel.

They both shake hands. And then Essel leaves.


Essel - So that's why i had such strange feeling seeing her.

The next day, he sees the same girl. This time Essel approaches her.
Essel -      Hi Amanda.
Amanda - Hey, How are you?
Essel -       I am fine.
Amanda - Okay, cya later.

Amanda then leaves.

Depp - Hey dude, How do you know him?
Essel - She is in our class. Is she not? So there is no point not knowing her.
Depp - But She is a new comer in the school. And it's her first day today.
Essel - Oh really. Then why was she saying that she knew me as she is from our class?






3 comments:

Tanay said...

its good that now you have made it clear that the dreams are an integral part of the story and we'll get to read of Essel's dreams in almost every chapter. this makes it exciting.

had u not made it clear, then readers might have thought they r being cheated, coz everytime something interesting happens, they get to know it was a dream.

Now they know that these dreams are the fuel of the story, so it feels better

Sarosh Lodi said...

These dreams have much more significance then that, u'll get to knw abt it in later chapters.

Bharat Garg said...

you wrie nice yaar. Agar OSD sir ise padhenge to unka expert comment hoga:" JI HAAN KAHANI FILMY HAI, BETA SAB MOH-MAYA HAI".


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